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Ashlee Gadd's avatar

Loved this, Tresta -- both your words and the writing prompt itself. I shared this link with a writing community this morning, and can't wait to write my own version!

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Tresta Payne's avatar

Thank you, Ashlee. I’d love to see what other writers find in their exploration of the prompt, and I’m honored you shared this piece!

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Megan Willome's avatar

Love where this went, Tresta!

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TomDarin.L's avatar

Really loved this.

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Tresta Payne's avatar

Thanks Tommy ; )

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Taryn Gaudin Body Conscious's avatar

I love your writing. I really feel you. We are currently travelling, and have to wash in very little water - it’s not easy, and I am reminded of my privilege that I can even say that.

Thank you for sharing x

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Tresta Payne's avatar

Thank you Taryn. I hope your travels are a joy!

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Leah Beecher's avatar

Wonderful snapshot of childhood life-exterior events and interior workings. Its a wonder to realize how those mundane moments of repetitive practice form us. Keep forming us.

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Tresta Payne's avatar

Yes! We are always being formed, and how great that the everyday things are part of that.

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Kris Camealy's avatar

What a tender glimpse into your childhood. I love discovering this about you and China, and the cost of getting that horse. I hope you’re inspired to share more of these stories.....My aunt and uncle had sulfur water in their home when I was growing up and I always remember the smell and slip of it. They treated it with something to help the aroma, but it was always there just a bit, and would surprise you in full when you’d open the dishwasher or washing machine--no detergent could overpower it’s punch. Dishes and laundry are two places where stories for writing are often stirred up. I suppose this is a solid nudge to keep doing those seemingly-mundane tasks as if digging for treasure. It’s worth it for layers of reasons.

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Tresta Payne's avatar

Thank you for the encouragement, friend.

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Jody L. Collins's avatar

Oh my goodness this was wonderful, Tresta. And I am old enough to remember Madge and her Palmolive commercials as well........I had NO IDEA the name was a contraction of palm and olive oil.

Who knew?

But yes, I agree....I'm sure that dishwashing led to you becoming a writer. And for that I am so very glad.

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